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Pokemon Deviantists: Chapter 8.

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AN: Hoooo boy it's been a long time since I did this. But I figure it's time to get back onto the band wagon and write this mother trucker!

For the disclaimer see previous chappies thanks:)

Pokemon Deviantists: Chapter 8: Daycare fun/torture.

We join our heroes on the road once again, leaving Suiteki City after their anticlimactic gym battle. "Man I was expecting a fight not for some noodle guy to give us a badge for showing up!", Lachlan exclaimed as he was expecting a good fight from the Gym leader. "Look on the plus side we got the Reef Badge.", Alex said showing off the badge. Erza rolled his eyes at that, "You would've failed straight away turtle boy." Alex glared at Erza for that. As they were walking a red multi tailed fox Pokemon appeared. "Wow a Vulpix!", Alex exclaimed, "I've always wanted a Vulpix." Alex was about to battle when "Hey you kids!", A woman looking to be in her late 30s appeared! "You kids wanna help me round up the baby Pokemon? They escaped!", as she said that several small Pokemon appeared. "D'waah!", Lachlan cried as he was swarmed by some of them. This caused the group to sweatdrop. After all the baby Pokemon were recaptured. "Phew I'm getting too old for this.", the woman said as she turned to face them, "Thanks kiddos." "No worries old lady", Lachlan said and was promptly clonked over the head by the woman. "I'M NOT THAT OLD I'M STILL YOUNG AND SPRITLY THANK YOU VERY MUCH!", the woman shouted. "Mama who're you shouting at?", a voice upstairs asked. "No one sweetpea.", the woman replied. "Say are you boys Pokemon trainers?", the woman asked. "Uh yeah actually.", Alex replied but added, "But we're not really that strong...."

"What do you mean not strong! We're amazing!", Lachlan replied. The woman ignores Lachlan's pleas, "You want training fine. Roxanne! Show these boys the training grounds will you?" At that order a cute busty girl came downstairs. She had quite possibly the biggest mammary glands that Alex had ever seen. In his eyes she was the cutest girl ever. And in Roxanne's eyes she felt the same way to Alex. They were blushing and not moving. Erza was just looking at her boobages and Lachlan..........he was indifferent. "Roxanne? Show the boys the training grounds please", Roxanne's mother obviously said. "O-oh right....this way", Roxanne said shyly looking at Alex. Roxanne took the boys to an underground section of the daycare center. "This part of the daycare center is for those um......hardcore types....", Roxanne said whilst looking at Alex. "Cool! Let's get training guys!", Lachlan shouted as he sent out Honeydew and Polijin. "Right....Please enter the cage please.", Roxxane asked politely.

In the cage our heroes sent out their only Pokemon. Before they could react they were set upon by various Pokemon such as Tauros, Miltank and Ekans. "Whoa, whoa whoa!", Erza shouted as he and his Pokemon dodged out of the way of a Persian's Slash attack. "A good Pokemon trainer thinks on his feet.", Roxanne's mother states, "Think on your feet or be defeated." Smart idea if you're a marine notso much if you're a teenage boy. "Okok we need to think.", Alex said as he dodged a Take Down from the Tauros. "Just wail on 'em!", Lachlan shouted back as he barely missed a Rollout from the Miltank. "Asura use Sunny Day and then Flamethrower!", Erza shouted. Asura sent out a ball of flame that replicated the sun and then sent out a glorious flame erupted from it's mouth burning the Tauros. "Honeydew! Use the sun to your advantage! Solarbeam!", Lachlan shouted as Honeydew released a stream of solar power at the Miltank. "Ah very smart thinking but what about the water types hmm?", Roxanne's mother stated looking at Roshi. He looked haggard and tired. "Roshi! Use Rain Dance followed up by Water Pulse!", Alex shouted. Roshi sent up a blast of water causing the sun to disperse and the rain to fall, then Roshi fired off a pulse of water towards the Persian. "Cool! Polijin fire off a Bubblebeam!", Lachlan retorted as Polijin fired off a wave of bubbles.

About 2 hours later our heroes were tired from all the training. All of a sudden bright lights began emanating from Honeydew, Roshi and Asura. "Whoa what the!", Erza cried out as the three Pokemon began to change and grow. Honeydew had evolved into Ivysaur, Asura had evolved into Charmeleon and Roshi had evolved into Wartortle. "Wow!", Lachlan exclaimed happily. "There you see? With training like this you can grow stronger and stronger.", Roxanne's mother stated. "Seeing as how good you boys were I've decided to give you some rewards.", She said as she gave them each a stone and an odd item. "Each of these items represent the type you were given. The Leaf, Fire and Water stones are used in evolution. That and these items, the Charcoal, Mystic Water and Miracle Seed increase their attack power.", She explained. Meanwhile up in Roxanne's room she was packing her bags. "I can't just let him go without me....", She mumbled as she packed.

Just as our heroes were about to leave. "Wait!", Roxanne shouted as she tripped and fell onto Alex. "I wanna come with you guys!.", She said as she picked herself up. "Sure! Absolutely come with us!", Alex said quickly. Roxanne blushed at that. And so as our heroes left the daycare center with a heroine in tow Roxanne's mother looked on as her daughter left hand in hand with some boy. "Go and get 'em kiddo.", She said wistfully.

NEXT TIME ON POKEMON DEVIANTISTS: Our heroes reach Dark City. And the place is in the middle of a blackout. Oe Noes! What will they do? They can't fight the gym leader cause she's scared of the dark! Double Oe Noes! And the Pokemon Center's lost power as well! Triple Oe Noes! The Pokemon are in danger because they're badly injured and might die if the power doesn't get back on! Quadradupelo Oe Noes! Will our heroes save the day? Tune in next time to find out!
It's baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaack and now introducing Roxanne majorastar's girl and breeder in training! Please R&R plz thank you:)
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DevilGearKombat's avatar
Just from a quick glance, I'd like to point out some things:
Every time another characters speaks, they get their own paragraph.
If at the end of speech, you have any form of punctuation, you don't need a comma before the speech tag.
Write the words for numbers, not the numbers, e.g. ''two'' not ''2''.